Friday, August 12, 2011

A bit of my story, too confusing?

I love it! Your vocabulary is beautiful! Is this the beginning? I'm guessing (and hoping) not. Either way, it's a bit confusing. I figured it out but i think you'll have to do a little more explaining of the characters before you jump into the dialog. Great job with your wording, work on your flow. Good job!

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